Hello everyone..I'm back!! :)
Yeah I know I have been a bit too busy with my life,and couldn't find any time for blogging..But then it was always on my mind..I knew I had to post something..But had no idea about what exactly should i write!!
And suddenly my bro came to my rescue with something that he wrote few days back.. It took me 4 days to convince him to give me the copyrights for his poem :P He never wanted me to post this because according to him "No-one would get it" but at the end i somehow managed toforce convince him :D
And before i paste his poem here..let me tell you i find it "weird" as i don't know the pain he is talking about.. and i can't relate to it.
Okay so here it goes-
"His excuse in a hand,
In his pain he began to speak,
Words so vivid ,yet camouflaged by a maze,
Try getting them,before he covers them by his mistakes;
Now imagine his pain;was never for vain,
Those drops were real; yet being concealed by rain,
Is it the first time (NO)
Is it the last time (Never)
So what do you want me to do?
(wish you could do something....)
Just let that pain echo in the clouds,
For those who get it,must feel proud,
Proud?????
They would get to see,
A pain so rightful;real and distinct,
I bet they sell their lives to get it extinct..!!"
If you read it and can relate to it,or you like it..or you don't find it that weird..feel free to comment below and lethim me know. even if you find it totally crazy and weird,do comment and this time...i'll let him know :P
Have a great day/week/month (depending on when i post next) :)
Yeah I know I have been a bit too busy with my life,and couldn't find any time for blogging..But then it was always on my mind..I knew I had to post something..
And suddenly my bro came to my rescue with something that he wrote few days back.. It took me 4 days to convince him to give me the copyrights for his poem :P He never wanted me to post this because according to him "No-one would get it" but at the end i somehow managed to
And before i paste his poem here..let me tell you i find it "weird" as i don't know the pain he is talking about.. and i can't relate to it.
Okay so here it goes-
"His excuse in a hand,
In his pain he began to speak,
Words so vivid ,yet camouflaged by a maze,
Try getting them,before he covers them by his mistakes;
Now imagine his pain;was never for vain,
Those drops were real; yet being concealed by rain,
Is it the first time (NO)
Is it the last time (Never)
So what do you want me to do?
(wish you could do something....)
Just let that pain echo in the clouds,
For those who get it,must feel proud,
Proud?????
They would get to see,
A pain so rightful;real and distinct,
I bet they sell their lives to get it extinct..!!"
If you read it and can relate to it,or you like it..or you don't find it that weird..feel free to comment below and let
Have a great day/week/month (depending on when i post next) :)
nice lines...ur bro seems to know 1 or 2 things bout pain
ReplyDeleteAccha :P bata dungi use tumne ye kaha..
DeleteWelcome back,mam :) i'm a literature student nd i dont know but thrz sumthing about this poem..i can relate to!! Few lines r epic..like "A pain so rightful;real and distinct,I bet they sell their lives to get it extinct.." i can sense the pain of the writer.and very nicely expressed.. wud like to see more of his poems.
ReplyDeleteAnd for you..keep posting more regularly :)
Hii Shreya.. Thanks for the positive feedback :)
DeleteAnd thanks for following my blog.. and i'l tel him that u want more of his poems :P
Hello Suboohi.. I'm new to ur blog. Liked ur previous posts also and this 1 is also superb.. i dont find it weird at all.. ur bro is a nice poet..he surely has sumthing in his mind which can work in his favour or go against him(in the extremes)
ReplyDeleteGud luck for ur blog.
Hey Kshitij.. thanks for following the blog n for ur comments!!
DeleteThis is flawless,i tell you! "Words so vivid ,yet camouflaged by a maze,
ReplyDeleteTry getting them,before he covers them by his mistakes" these r my favrt lines. Why dont u publish it in sum magazine?
Flawless??OMG :D Thanks,on his behalf!! And about publishing..he doesnt want to..
DeleteI can get every bit of the pain..these lines touched my heart!! I have loved n lost so i know what pain is..and my pain is my power and i wish to teach all those ppl a lesson due to whom i cudnt marry my love..i hate this world n these sick hypocrites! U know..she ended her life due to all this. And iv made my life hell.. This pain wont ever leave me..and u know why they were against us..becoz she was a muslim.. she never wanted to hurt her family,so she hurt herself! And she went away..leaving me alone n lifeless. That too when we belong to so called educated familes. She died but every bit of her is alive in my heart,in my mind n in my soul. i wont leave those murderers. This pain makes me strong..this pain gives runs inside my veins.
ReplyDeleteTell ur bro to give a direction to his pain. Following u now.
Hey Shivam.. Life is very unfair to sum ppl n we live in a sad bad world. U had to bear a lot,just coz u love someone(i wont use past tense here,coz u still do) and im sure noone can get this poem on pain better than u.
DeleteStay strong and wait for a silver lining in the dark clouds.
Thanks for ur kind words.. there's no silver lining now. She was the only silver lining in my life.. now only death can take away this pain. And yes,u r right..i love her..she will never become past in my life. she is my present n future everything..now wen she is not here,her memories r enough for me to survive.
DeleteTouching lines indeed, Suboohi...esp. the last 2 lines seal it...
ReplyDeleteGuess you have been pretty busy! No updates in Blog from long...
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